Jeniffer: Like about the newspaper: There are a lot of detail about Taylor Swift, and she also add small thing like email,picture of written by and interesting sentence to persuade reader.
Improve:Some sentence that too long that makes reader confuse, she can make it a full stop or a period. Improve:The title was hard to see the word because it quite too dark. think you can change another font to makes it better.
Jeniffer:
ReplyDeleteLike about the newspaper: There are a lot of detail about Taylor Swift, and she also add small thing like email,picture of written by and interesting sentence to persuade reader.
Improve:Some sentence that too long that makes reader confuse, she can make it a full stop or a period.
Improve:The title was hard to see the word because it quite too dark. think you can change another font to makes it better.